My days are lonely, without you,
You are so far away,
I miss you, my darling,
But here, I have to stay.
Some day, you'll see the way,
Of this love, I feel inside,
Please my darling, don't you cry,
You will never be denied.
Blest are the moments,
We keep so dear,
Burning in my heart and soul,
Of yeasterdays, while not apart.
The scent of you, my darling,
Lingers on my pillow,
As I close my tearful eyes,
To dream, hoping for a surprise.
As I pray, that at sunrise,
When the sun rays,
Present a new day,
You my darling, will be here to stay.
By: William Bonilla.....10/13/02
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|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|A lovely and very touching poem
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|William, your gentle spirit and loving nature sings even though these lonely words. Wonderful write and I hope it's only poetry.|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|William, Your poems are full of yearning and need. Please don't be lonely. We're all a piece of your heart.
Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Dear William...This is so sweet and lovely write...touchy write...heart felt william....cheers..love n luck...BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|A lovely, "awareness" piece, William, origins are our beginnings...I love the diversity I see...expand. :)|
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Deep moving heartfelt and very pure excellent write|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|I agree with Peggy, William...
Your poems touch the heart..
This is an amazing write...
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|bittersweet and touching beautifully voiced...|
|Reviewed by Madame X
|Lovely, lovely write.|
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|Such a lovely lonely piece.
I hope you find your love soon.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|A lovely sentimental piece! I loved this!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|lovely imagery, touching poem...|
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
This is beautiful, you have a heart of gold for that special lady in your life.
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|I hope she comes back soon William..this was lovely...floria|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
This is so beautiful,
I just posted a miss you one too.
I love your poems they touch ones heart.