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I had this on the other
day but only for a short time..
Distorted..



Distorted perceptions
of who I am..
My mind always
changing..
This way..
No.. that way..
Maybe no way
Is the best way..
What do you want?
I don’t know..
What is love..
I am not sure..
Who loves you..
No one
I think..
But I don’t know
the meaning..
How am I to say?
My distorted perceptions..
I think..
I am moving up..
Getting over..
Trying hard..
To find I am
Falling down..
Going fast..
Nothing lasts
Hit by the
reality
Of the delusion
I created..
With my
distorted perceptions..
Of this life..
I am debating..
Can’t believe
my own eyes.
Cannot trust
my own heart
So confused..
Torn apart.
It is death..
I have courted..
Wondering why..
Hope was aborted..
Spontaneously
It seems...
I am coming apart
at the seams..
I am enclosed
in the dark
But I feel the
warmth of light..
How am I to know..
To sit
To fight..
Am I to guess..
What’s wrong..
What’s right..
Distorted perceptions..
Makes me wonder..
Keeps me guessing..
As I figure out
the truth..
In this life filled
With misconceptions.
Of these
My distorted perceptions.

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Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
"Hit by the
reality
Of the delusion
I created..."
This describes it so well.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Erica this was so interesting...gosh I had to catch it before it scrolled off the board..great write..floria
Reviewed by Trixie Love
Hi Erica,
What an excellent write..

Trixie
Reviewed by jude forese
your perceptions are preceptive...
Reviewed by Christine Morell
Excellent, profound piece Erica
Chrissie
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Erica this is an excellent write,
very thought provoking
Warm love
Tinka
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Told ya! Now everyone else agrees that this is great!
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
erica...thsi is thought provoking write...superb...BHUWAN
Reviewed by Tony Nerone
Dear Erica, Both versions were excellent!
ty
tony
Reviewed by William Bonilla
an excellent write,
very thought provoking

William
Reviewed by Micha Julian
Oh, again Erica...Shivers, this, so relate...so well done/felt, so felt ans ever so well written...YES! This says more than I can describe, it speaks volumes to me and just ((((you))))
thank YOU!
Reviewed by E T Waldron
excellent insight Erica, and your perceptions are just fine now!;-)
Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)
Erica...great write and this sounds like a woman to me. Been there and back many times!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Well done, again.
~E
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Nice write!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Erica,
This is so thought provoking so raw
and life is a big distortion at times.
Hugs wonderful write.
Peg
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