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Distorted Perceptions repost
by Erica Ivory
Friday, March 21, 2003

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I had this on the other
day but only for a short time..
Distorted..



Distorted perceptions
of who I am..
My mind always
changing..
This way..
No.. that way..
Maybe no way
Is the best way..
What do you want?
I don’t know..
What is love..
I am not sure..
Who loves you..
No one
I think..
But I don’t know
the meaning..
How am I to say?
My distorted perceptions..
I think..
I am moving up..
Getting over..
Trying hard..
To find I am
Falling down..
Going fast..
Nothing lasts
Hit by the
reality
Of the delusion
I created..
With my
distorted perceptions..
Of this life..
I am debating..
Can’t believe
my own eyes.
Cannot trust
my own heart
So confused..
Torn apart.
It is death..
I have courted..
Wondering why..
Hope was aborted..
Spontaneously
It seems...
I am coming apart
at the seams..
I am enclosed
in the dark
But I feel the
warmth of light..
How am I to know..
To sit
To fight..
Am I to guess..
What’s wrong..
What’s right..
Distorted perceptions..
Makes me wonder..
Keeps me guessing..
As I figure out
the truth..
In this life filled
With misconceptions.
Of these
My distorted perceptions.

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Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook 3/22/2003
"Hit by the
reality
Of the delusion
I created..."
This describes it so well.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 3/22/2003
Erica this was so interesting...gosh I had to catch it before it scrolled off the board..great write..floria
Reviewed by Trixie Love 3/22/2003
Hi Erica,
What an excellent write..

Trixie
Reviewed by jude forese 3/22/2003
your perceptions are preceptive...
Reviewed by Christine Morell 3/22/2003
Excellent, profound piece Erica
Chrissie
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/22/2003
Erica this is an excellent write,
very thought provoking
Warm love
Tinka
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 3/22/2003
Told ya! Now everyone else agrees that this is great!
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 3/22/2003
erica...thsi is thought provoking write...superb...BHUWAN
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 3/21/2003
Dear Erica, Both versions were excellent!
ty
tony
Reviewed by William Bonilla 3/21/2003
an excellent write,
very thought provoking

William
Reviewed by Micha Julian 3/21/2003
Oh, again Erica...Shivers, this, so relate...so well done/felt, so felt ans ever so well written...YES! This says more than I can describe, it speaks volumes to me and just ((((you))))
thank YOU!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/21/2003
excellent insight Erica, and your perceptions are just fine now!;-)
Reviewed by Madame X (Reader) 3/21/2003
Erica...great write and this sounds like a woman to me. Been there and back many times!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 3/21/2003
Well done, again.
~E
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 3/21/2003
Nice write!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/21/2003
Erica,
This is so thought provoking so raw
and life is a big distortion at times.
Hugs wonderful write.
Peg
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