|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|inside the jungle of your mind
a drum beat
civilization is coming
no woder I have a headache...its you drumming civilization.....better go clean my head......with a cuppa coffee...
i enjoyed your write......keep those drums rolling.......I mean pen.....
|Reviewed by S. Hunter-Wilson
|The language this is speaking is very moving and intrigueing. This a profound piece with a much more deeper message within. Definitely excellent writing!Enjoyed much!|
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|Civilization is a good thing... thanks~Teresa|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|wow...very good write...BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|I hear these drums! Excellent.|
|Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
|great description here. Well done!|
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|inside the limitless eternity
a heart beats
pulsating and flowing
blood of ancestral pasts
ancient tablets of stone
This primal write of civilization to be.
Enjoyed this unique write
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
This is very nice indeed!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Oh now this one is
"inside the passion of your soul
a embrace sweet
pounding and pondering
primeval ages congregate
screaming tales of desire"
I love this one suspense.......
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Good poem. Reminds me of the book by Sam Keen, FIRE IN THE BELLY.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh I liked this! Very Primal!