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As The Jets Flew By Overhead...
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Sunday, March 23, 2003

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As The Jets Flew By Overhead…

Sitting on my mountain,
Safer than most,
But just as scared
As the those who fear
This terrible war-

Thinking of those,
Who now lie dead,
Feeling such sorrow,
For the prayers being said,
But then the jets flew overhead…

F-18’s scarring the sky,
Leaving their contrails as they flew by,
Fearless warriors patrolling the skies,
Watching their precision
As they flew side by side…

Sat here thinking of those
Who heard the call,
And didn’t think of themselves at all-
Just rose from their seats,
And formed a line,
Fighting for our freedom,
The only thing on their mind-

I sit here and listen,
To those who condemn,
Those who lash out,
Without thinking what it’s all about-

What does it matter who’s to blame?
Those are our children out there!
Our families and friends!
I don’t care who started it-
I just want them home safe again!

I will honor them with songs,
And words from my heart,
Give them parades for playing their part,
Stand when they pass by,
Try to hold back
The tears in my eyes…

I will salute the honor,
With which they fought,
In a far away land
Of lonely sand dunes,

I think of those who gave their lives,
Grieving with such sorrow
For the lives they leave behind,
And I will honor the dead,
With my heart and soul,
For the sacrifice they so willingly gave,
As the jets roar by overhead…


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Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 3/24/2003
Though they die with honor.... someone's brother, father, husband or son is not going to be coming home (mother, wife, sister, daughter as well)... Nice tribute... Teresa
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 3/24/2003
Clap Clap Clap...excellent....straight from the heart write...this poem have everything...BHUWAN
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 3/24/2003
Beautiful tribute.
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 3/24/2003
Art and knowledge embrace imagination and a true poem is born.

"As The Jets Flew By Overhead..." is a striking fuse thats prods the thoughts.

I Salute the Author of "As The Jets Flew by Overhead...".

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU



Reviewed by Lori Moore 3/23/2003
Beautiful!
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 3/23/2003
A wonderful tribute Retta
Reviewed by jude forese 3/23/2003
powerful trubute from deep within...
Reviewed by Nancy D. 3/23/2003
Outstanding write from your heart.

Nancy
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 3/23/2003
Wonderful!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/23/2003
BRAVO!!! Outstanding! Bless You!!!
Reviewed by Erica Ivory 3/23/2003
WOW... Stunning...Best I have read.

Erica~
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) 3/23/2003
Wonderful...wonderful!!! Did I say this is wonderful?!!
Reviewed by Trixie Love 3/23/2003
BRAVO!!!!
Outstanding once again....

Trixie :)
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 3/23/2003
Retta this is beautiful..lot of feeling here. floria
Reviewed by Christine Morell 3/23/2003
Beautifully done Reindeer...a wonderful, heartfelt tribute.
Chrissie
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 3/23/2003
Hi Retta, Thank You for the lovely tribute. I say this for all of us who serve, and have served.

Tony
Reviewed by Jimmy Mills 3/23/2003
Reindeer--As a soldier, I appreciate you empathy. This poem had me sitting in a postumous award ceremony of a Medal of Honor winner or a soldier being honored by a burial in the Arlington Cemetary as I watch the F-18s fly above at the completion of the ceremonies. It brought strong feelings and I thank you so much for it. You are truly bless in the world of creative writing. Thank you so much for sharing this masterpiece. Jim
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 3/23/2003
I think we all feel this way.
Well done. Thoughtful.
~E
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/23/2003
vivid, intense, heartbreaking write...thank you for sharing...and may God protect our men and women who thought nothing of all of answering the call...they are only following orders...God have mercy on them and their families...*tears* as one who once was in the air force, i salute you for this write...yet, i pray for peace...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
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