|Reviewed by Linda Murray
|You have such a way with words that makes one want to keep reading on. This will be a cherished memory for you and your wife.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|created a wonderful moment... superb poem...|
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Tenderly written, I also got a tear.
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Excellent, my friend. This
bought a tear to my eye also.
Such a lucky child to have
parents who REALLY love him
or her. Excellent!!!!
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|Brought back memories od my now ten year old son.. How time flies.. This is the writing of a true parent .. Your love shines through.. Lucky you ..lucky child..
|Reviewed by K. Raposo
|Awesome sweeti!! Keep enjoyin ur writin! Luv always ~*BliSs*~|
|Reviewed by Frater Kaos
|Reviewed by Kimberlee
|Awesome work.Your creativity and your gift amazes me. This poem makes me anticipate the future and makes me happy to say, Oh...I can remember. Thanks for making my heart flutter when you allow me to get a glimpse of what moves you..your poetry.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Sweet as can be.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so sweet and lovely! I could just see this wonderful scene in my mind, You are a master poet Jim, and this is truly a masterpiece!