|Reviewed by richard poor
|you nailed this one!!!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|expressed with intense passion and longing...|
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix
|this was a very sad and beatufilly heart touching poem awesome job on it|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Excellent flow and form, Susan. The message is sad and, yes, I do believe there is a hint of hope, also. Great write!|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Dear Susan, You write so beautifully. I am crying for both my friends.
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Yes Susan...I know this feeling..been there..and you know what? it does subside..life can be so difficult at times...love can hurt so bad....sensitive people who love with all their soul...also hurt with all their soul..I am very sensitive..but also strong..just hang in there..stay strong..there is much life ahead for you...happiness is always just around the corner...this was sad..greatly expressed..you are a fine poet..love..floria|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|I am, this is lovely poetry.|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|This is terribly sad and beautifully written
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Susan, wonderful poetry.|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|I think someone is very sad.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Beautiful poem although it does reek of "It Takes A Vllage," syndrome. Oh, it's good to be back reading your poems, I've been away.|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Susan, I wish life was just love.
Excellent art and verses.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Susan....I am here for you...dont u cry...cheers...love n luck...great write...BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|I've said my tears are like dust! Could the wind just blow them away?|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Well done Susan! I love it when they rhyme and you do it so well.
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Susan, I'd cry for you anytime anyplace, if that would put a smile on your face and ease the pain in your heart. For I have been where you are now and know how the hurt gradually numbs you until there is no more tears and yet nothing will ease the hurting inside. So I'll cry for you so long as necessary. A century of more if you will it. Bill|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
I Think What You're Trying To say Is It Is Time To Stop Crying ,Start Doing!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Wow, lots of grief in this one.
Well written with a rhythm to match.