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Love...So Refined
by Susan K. de Vegter

Tuesday, March 25, 2003

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Love...So Refined

What do folks do with the words I love you
Does the whisper in ears...give solace to few
What does it take when rhythms run wild
With beats of the heart and the smile of a child
The sentence of lovers to the future of holds
For caresses of minutes and gestures so bold
I love you...is it true ...a warm promise at best
The soul of a chance with the touch of a test
What fate is aroused when these words break air
Will you fly with the storks or sail as a pair
Doves of all lovers lost in the clouds
Cooing and winging...singing aloud
Chasing the heart...with blossoms of roses
Sparkle of eyes and kisses on noses
Chins all uplifted to embrace the kiss
His love is hers and her heart is his
Butterfly kisses and fingers entwined
Grace of a pair with hearts all refined
Smiles breaking faces and gentle warm hugs
Hearts all crimson with pushes and shoves
Lovers of shadows and warm southern breezes
Quiet forms of sweethearts with tugs and soft squeezes
Lightning displays when evenings bring comets
Flashing emotion from the ground to the summit
Love held on high with the greatest of ease
I love you is whispered on this southern breeze
The pair of shapes...all merged in time
Lovers who love...with their love refined.

2003 Susan K. Rowse

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Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 3/26/2003
So very beautiful
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader) 3/26/2003
this was wonderfully amazing you are a superb master of poetry ncie job on this poem
Reviewed by Erica Ivory 3/26/2003
Superb Susan.. The picture and gorgeous the writing excellent! Enjoyed this MUCH
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 3/26/2003
Susan this is lovely, you are so very masterful with rhyme.
Reviewed by J John (Reader) 3/26/2003
beautiful write :) J & J
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 3/26/2003
Excellent Susan...BHUWAN
Reviewed by Paul Berube 3/26/2003
Susan, love the poem. Gave me a touch of the tender feeling inside.
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 3/26/2003
Stunning, Susan.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 3/26/2003
Lovely:)


tony
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 3/25/2003
Beautiful Susan. And a lovely rhythm to the lines too. Well done.
~E
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/25/2003
Superb!
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