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|Reviewed by sarah
|Ben i really love ya poetry it means something 2 me it make me sad reading them but,i can't help it i love them so much.
love sarah xxxxxxxxooooooooo
|Reviewed by Phoebe
|It's was so meaning full and sad keep it up
|Reviewed by Jeremy de Laroche (Reader)
|Ben. My dearest friend. I understand how you feel and what your going through. I unfortunately know what you are talking about in this miserable poem. I feel like this everyday most of the time. Welcome, ben, to my world. Where i rule supremé. Haha. I am only joking. Don't worry man. A wise person once told me. "there can be miracles, when you believe". Ok, so i got it off a song, it still applies, I am not the wise man, telling you. Believe, and things will happen, but, just believing won't help, when the chance comes up, you have to help the miracle come true. Another special lady shall enter your life my friend. And you shall rejoice, and love like you had never been hurt:) Namárië, May my blessings follow you in your wanderings, and may those blessings go out to all the people who read your poem of love, grief, and pain. Talk to you soon!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|nice flow of consciousness...|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Fantastic write. ~Trish~|
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|Someone has lots and lots of pride. This is very well said.....very emotional. Great job on this. Teresa|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)