|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|i like this|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Truly amazing Melissa...
You need a book ;)
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
You are so talented, and such a beautiful soul, your work shines...always! This is a very touching, and very true write! I truly loved it!
|Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)
|One day when I click on one of your poems I may be disapointed, but not so far and definately not today! Wonderful Melissa! Mal.|
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza
|when there's sorrow there is sweetness somewhere...|
|Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
|... it is well with your soul; i cant tell from the positive thrust of this lovely poem.|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Melissa, outstanding write. Much wisdom in age.|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Melissa, now I can see my foresight in writing a song with you. You are using what songwriters call "power" words. In other words your words explode in this poem.
Stagger the mind and heart of the reader, and stun someone like me who knows how hard it is to develop a style like this. Each time I read you, you have taken another step upward like climbing the stairs to Heaven. Please let me know if you write something you think would be an excellent song. I know you know what yor are doing and the meaning of your work. God love for you and for your talent and ability. Please if you want to here how well she can write song lyrics, go to my
and click on our co/authored song:
"I Can't Forget Your Love." and listen to
her sweet and passionate lyrics. Bill
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Words and verses...perfect. A gem.
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Your poetry flows so well
and is always outstanding....
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Beautiful and reflective. Great write.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Always first rate...beautifully depicted acceptance of the traces of time...|
|Reviewed by JimmyHolder ShyPoet1
|It is a strength that would not shine
if not for wisdom learned…
... Really Brilliant Writing!