|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Nice poem ! A beautiful picture is captured throughout the write|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Wow, love that ending...two word, shattered and cruel, and, of course, Man, certainly killed that fantasy...great write, Phoenix!!!|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Really nice work here chad..floria|
|Reviewed by Oisín Breen
|good use of alliteration.
you been readin verse poets recently?
nice nice indeed.
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Nothing like nature and the great outdoors! Great write!|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|An excellent piece of writing Chad. I love this.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Nice one Chad.
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|beautiful poetry of nature,. Nice.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|I can invision this. Beautiful nature write.|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Good Morning Chad
Nice easy flowing poem for me to digest this early AM. Wow, you write so great.
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|This is a lovely picture that you paint of nature. Wonderful! ~Trish~|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Chad, 2nd line "greed" to "green." A very soft and gentle natural poem. Here I see a human being. An independent person setting his own flight, his own way, for his journey through life. It is time you begin to fly. Great Start! Bill|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Excellent, my sweet friend..
I am always amazed at
your talent. Your writing
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|P.P. excellent poem. Great to hit the great outdoors and the fresh air so early in the morning.|