Enjoying the World
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Thursday, March 27, 2003
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(It can be done, I hope.)
With all the turmoil, war and strife,
It's kind of hard to
I mean, it's just hard.
ATTITUDE to the rescue!
This is your que.
A strong positive attitude,
will give you more
felt like crap
my mental mind all day,
to stay in the positive
it's not easy to rule,
the mind tool.
But you shouldn't accept nothing but the best for yourself.
Learning to feel good,
is like carving wood,
A work of art, a work of art.
I refuse to say
I wrote this because my day was like hell. I'm just trying to keep up the good attitude. I just can't allow myself not to look for some light. This is why I attitude fight. When you read what I write, I read what I write. It's just part of the fight. A friend on the Den put it something like this, "these things in my head." Well I fight with these things each and everyday. It is my contention to win and I do.
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|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Excellent attitude Grady and excellent write....I think it sometimes doesn't come across in my poetry but by getting all the negative stuff out onto paper I'm left strong to cope with each day ( well that's my excuse anyway LOL )|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Attitude realy does it all. If I keep doing what I am trying to do. Publish my
songs ... attitude begins my victory or defeat. And maintining a good attitude in the face of defeat is so hard to do. Bill
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Great write Grady, I have days like this at least once a week. It can really bring one down. Take care.
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|Touche.. We all have said days. Great job, as always.....
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Yeah...me too Grady...I have days like that..but we cant give up...I love good days..and hope you have more good than bad...good strong write..floria|