|Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
|Sounds like love. :-) Beautifully written.
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
|This really grabbed
tugged at heart strings...
Beautiful as always..
|Reviewed by A PAX
wish I wrote it!!!
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Your rhyme is flawless....your poetry deep and gutsy.....love it! ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
|This one is perfect for lovers separated, one gone to join the fight. And I have to agree with Jack..I love the rhyme!|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Grrrrrrr, I (JC) was supposed to be signed into Caldwell Phillips, anyway, we really love it and now, I am signed into my name.
Alan & Janet xoxoxoxo
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I really enjoyed this excellent write!|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so lovely!
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
"As we cling to love renewed
The world outside seems so askewed
But in our lair of happiness
It all seems right with just one kiss "
this verse says it all..wonderful write..floria
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|An absolutely beautiful poem Sherry in its sentiments and in its form. It really touched me.
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Sherri...I love this part.
"I kiss you here and I kiss you there,
My hungry kisses everywhere
My lips against your skin ignite
Come morning, gone to join the fight" ...
Passionate. And very well written. Bill
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|classic drop, poet. not a word misused. a soldier with a woman like you waiting doesn't have to worry about jody getting his girl, to quote an old army cadence. hearts twinned, stay true...|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Absolutely beautiful !
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A whole lot of kissing going one;-) I really enjoyed this excellent beauty!|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Ahhh my rhyming friend, this is Very nice!! I love it when they rhyme.