Your presence and Spring,
Lovely is the day, that follows you,
Clear, cloudy, warm or moist,
Life abound being renewed.
Orange and cherry trees, in blossom,
Flowers in the fields blooming,
Nature's perfume, lingers in the air,
Birds happily singing, without care.
Songs soothing and peaceful, to the mind,
Walking, as I hold your hand,
And you hold mine,
Wonderful, sharing moments, this time.
Cleansing, is the Spring rain,
To rain drops, pelt the pane,
In the quiet night, as sleep we seek,
With a rhythm, it serenades us,
Gently to sleep.
By: William Bonilla......2/07/02
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|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Stunning piece of poetry. Beautiful ~Trish~|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|You write beautiful poetry.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|peaceful and romanticly calm write....I feel relaxed after reading this
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
This is so serene and beautiful and the imagery wonderful. A joy to read.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|UmmmmUmmmm. That is nice.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|lovely atmosphere... pleasure to read ;)|
|Reviewed by Allen Filius (Reader)
|Loved it! Wonderful write..
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|soft and beautiful like the gentle spring rain that soothes away winter's weariness. Wonderful job.|
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Spring captured in your writing, excellent write William. A favorite time of year for me.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Superb poetry William, you are on a roll;-)!|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Hey William, You my friend I think is what Andre calls a Master Poet. Thank You for the fine read.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so softly beautiful, just such a pleasant poem to read on this beautiful spring day,