A Thousand Roses
by Bourge
Saturday, March 29, 2003
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I'd leave a thousand roses,
if I thought you'd see them there,
to let you know that never
in this life I'd cease to care.
I'd cry a thousand teardrops,
if I thought you'd ever know,
how much I've cried in all these years,
since when you had to go.
I'd find myself a thousand blades,
and shed my blood with each,
if I thought in my demise
I'd find myself within your reach.
I'd beg a thousand nightly prayers,
if I thought I had a cause,
but how could any god so great
slay hearts as pure as yours?
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
4/2/2003 |
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| A very soulful and heartfelt piece of writing. I'm amazed at the talent of one so young. ~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Jesus |
3/31/2003 |
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| This is beautiful Charl, really really sweet :) This is probably my favourite poem out of everything you've written so far, it's so pretty! Well done babe :) |
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| Reviewed by Claire Shaw (Reader) |
3/30/2003 |
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| verrryyyyy good |
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| Reviewed by Dan |
3/29/2003 |
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Good Poem
ur too good at this
and ur too confusing |
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| Reviewed by Jamez |
3/29/2003 |
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v.sweet
loves ya
jammy xx |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/29/2003 |
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Want him close at hand.
Lovely poem. |
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