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| Reviewed by Mary Cannon |
4/1/2003 |
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| A nice read you do have a way with words.. |
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| Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook |
3/30/2003 |
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| Seems even more beautiful than the first time I read it. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/30/2003 |
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I am working on a bottle message myself ...here is some line of it..as a preview..
I Say farewell to those bottles!
You have celebrated their contents
Now I fill them with messages
And releasing them slowly
On wild current promises
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Love you poem and may you read mine soon
Love
Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Oisín Breen |
3/30/2003 |
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| a powerful message |
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
3/29/2003 |
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| Touchingly beautiful. full of unfulfilled promise. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/29/2003 |
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| Very beautfiully written, it still has hope;-) |
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| Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader) |
3/29/2003 |
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| Very nice Jack! |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
3/29/2003 |
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Beautiful! I hope they will meet each other very soon.
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$ |
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| Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon |
3/29/2003 |
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| I love this! Reminds me of that book "Message in a Bottle". Wonderful poem. ;) Silver |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/29/2003 |
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Lovely the second time around.
Bravo. |
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| Reviewed by Sandra Corona |
3/29/2003 |
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Beautiful sentiments. Sometimes the message may wind up going to the wrong person so its best that it 'bides' its time for the right one.
Sandy |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
3/29/2003 |
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| Wonderful poetry Jack........You're truly a master of wording.....ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
3/29/2003 |
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| very very nicc. so sad |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/29/2003 |
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This was so very sad and beautiful! I am so glad you reposted it! I never got to see it the first time around, and I would have missed this lovely poem,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Victor Jensen |
3/29/2003 |
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| Hope it's the beginning of a true love. Anyway it's a excellent poem. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/29/2003 |
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| beautiful message in this write, russ; and love the rhyming in this! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :) |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
3/29/2003 |
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| Jack this is so nice...I always wished to find a message in a bottle...great sentiments here..Floria |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
3/29/2003 |
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| Beautiful. I remember this one. It is still one of my favorites. |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
3/29/2003 |
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| The message drifts forever. Great write! |
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