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First Person Plural
by Steve Patterson

Saturday, March 29, 2003

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First Person Plural
sorta' seem's Surreal
make quite a mural
all a' the faces
all a' the traces
strange how ya' feel
livin' in First Person Plural

All of my "I's"
make all a' Their try's
at sayin goodbyes
ta' all a' my Lies

if i could just Be
only One a' Me
i just might See
i might just be Free

First Person Plural
sure is Surreal
makes a Big deal
outta' tryin' ta' Be Real

Strange how ya' Feel

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Reviewed by Oisín Breen 3/30/2003
its well written a little hard to get into which is unusual for your writing
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 3/30/2003
I didn't understand much of this; but since both Trish and ERin said it's good write, then I'll say:


Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 3/30/2003
An interesting and excellent write. ~Trish~
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 3/29/2003
Ha, I love this, Steve!! Many layers can be peeled and viewed!! :) Wonderful!
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