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sometimes
by john k zimmerman

Saturday, March 29, 2003

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Half
undressed
we
copulate
hungrily
on
the
floor
with
neither
grace
nor
long
preamble:
only
the
desperate
driven
desire
for
oneness
and
release
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Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore 4/3/2003
that's real alright. real primeval. :-)
Reviewed by jude forese 3/30/2003
the lustful heat of passion nicely delivered...
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/30/2003
quickies could get you in trouble!!! what if you miss the beat..........hehehehe....bearingknock....
and the clutch go...you stuck......lol
Love
Tinka
Reviewed by Marlene Dawn 3/30/2003
Sometimes the only way to get any is through quickies. :-) Especially once you have kids. I liked the way you wrote this. :-)

*Marlene*
Reviewed by Josephine Bohen 3/30/2003
perfect word alignment
josie
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/30/2003
excellent sensuality
Reviewed by Nessa Miller 3/30/2003
*grin*
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 3/30/2003
Nothing like a quicky! Great write.
Reviewed by Christine Morell 3/30/2003
Excellent!
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 3/30/2003
A minimalist poem at its best!.....Well-expressed!

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 3/30/2003
Wow, this was great. ~Trish~
Reviewed by Linda Hill 3/30/2003
Excellent! :)
Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza 3/30/2003
*blush* vivid in my mind... :)
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 3/29/2003
To the point! ;)
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 3/29/2003
woo-hoo, I like the down and dirty at times myself. ;)

Love, JC xoxoxoxo
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 3/29/2003
Get up off that floor before you catch your death...
On the other hand....
Nicely done.
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 3/29/2003
yep. you hit it right.
Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon 3/29/2003
yes, you are into understatement! LOL...but sometimes simple is best. ;) Silver
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/29/2003
simplicity at its best!...;-)
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