|Reviewed by Marco Landi
|Isolated from the world.
The only thing she ever felt was his fist.
In this palace of stone,
The fear was back in spades.
conquering pain and ....time
well done Mariah
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Maria, you forged a tale of the fall. Hurting and alone, denied freedom in chains.
But these chains will break soon and you will be free again. Let no one hold on to you are your heart like this. This poem is close to me, because I have written a song and have the tune for it from Nashville. It too is about a "Fallen Angel'" who is no longer a part of my life, but who I still miss terribly. Someone I know is so proud of you and your talent. I am also proud of you. Bill
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A sad but wonderful write,
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
You're words conquer the space of cyber and you give our peers your best.Your art selection is wonderful as well. You mature delightfully in your creative mode. You make me very proud of you.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|OHHHHHHHHHHH love the art and the verses
"Not leaving with a bang…only a whisper.
They all fall down."
|Reviewed by Oisín Breen
|the second and the last stansas are the best
its very good
|Reviewed by john zimmerman
|a good write
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|So very real....A wonderful poem....Thanks, Dani|