|Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)
|Now this I really love, I adore rhyming poetry. Mal.|
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|That "unconcern in his eyes" hit a nerve...had went through that once and never, ever want to live through it again (who does?!!). This is a moving, powerful write that touches the heart and soul.|
|Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza
|as if you have seen the bruises in my heart dear poet.... this has been powerful to me... eye-opener... thanks you...|
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|Better off without him, if you ask me. Take the letter and frame it with a caption that says, "saved by a 37 cent stamp." Good write, and tomorrow always comes.|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Honey, and I know you can't shrug it away. It has to wear away and somethings it talk a long time or until we meet someone to take their place. My emotions run rampart with my bi polar disorder. I am not normal and do not act normal. I may love someone a whole lot of time after they dump me. Bill|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|How painful Silver...I am sure everyone has at one time or another experienced this...you expressed it so well..Floria|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Silver,,,this is an awesome write but so very sad. I remember although it's been so many years ago,,how devastating these feelings are,,time and more time,,and prayer,,that is all that helps,,,Good job,,,Lisa|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|powerful! very well crafted write...|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
I Wished I Was 14 So I Could Get My 1st Car & Drivers License,Time Passages Faster Than You Can Go to Get Here Now__
It Is Better To Not Never Look Back...
|Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
|This poem was inspired twofold. One by a poem by a fellow AD author...who wrote a piece on how devastating and sad breakups are (to both of the participents) and the second by my wonderful friend, Beth, who has gone through this experience recently.
The sadness of it all tears at my heart and I can certainly emphathize with this emotion having felt it (multiple times) in my previous incarnation, B.M. (before Mike)...and I certainly hope to never ever feel that particular feeling of desolation again.
My heart goes out to all those who are experiencing it now or will do so in the future.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Oh, wow, Silver....painful, and proud, a stunning write filled with emotions. :)|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|An excellent and riveting poem. I really enjoyed it.
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|This is absolutely superb. Love the pic too! ~Trish~|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was just incredible, held me from the first word to the last,
|Reviewed by Jacqueline VanZandbeek
|Wow, nicely done. I enjoyed this read very much. Such a painful ending. Beautiful picture!