|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so passionate and wonderful!
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix
|very passionate and sensual nice job on this awesome poem|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|It is human to experience passion and relate it to others. It is human to need and have the urge. We are all blessed from you sharing with us.
Tave on and thank you for being whole and honest.
Love and harmony,
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
If Only It were True!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Naughty, but well done.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|oolala! Very passionate write naughty girly!!|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
I am opening the other window,
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|An impassioned lustful plea, Yeah!;-)Wonderfully written Marilyn...|
|Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J
|Very tastefully done, Marilyn.
Love from India - Joel -
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Wooo sensual Marilyn...nicely done..floria|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Wonderful senuality here. Trish|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|thats pure passion
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
Terrific sensuality here. Excellent!!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Wonderful use of the sense of sight. Very passionate write.|