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Can You See?
by Marilyn Seray

Sunday, March 30, 2003

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Nothing can break your concentration
as I look at you watching me

What do you see

Can you see my breathing falter

Do you see me tremble as I look into your
eyes

What about my breasts; can you see them
swell for your palms

And what about my dormant buds -
can you see them emerge and harden; begging
to have you expertly roll them between your
fingers

Can you see the shine of need on my silky
skin

Do you see my lips parting in thirst for just
a taste of you

Let me break through your spellbinding
stare so our eyes can connect and burst in
one fiery blaze that shoots straight to the
heavens and sprinkles it with what we both
now see

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Reviewed by m j hollingshead 3/30/2003
well done
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/30/2003
This was so passionate and wonderful!

Reindeer
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader) 3/30/2003
very passionate and sensual nice job on this awesome poem
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 3/30/2003
It is human to experience passion and relate it to others. It is human to need and have the urge. We are all blessed from you sharing with us.
Tave on and thank you for being whole and honest.

Love and harmony,
Susan
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 3/30/2003
3-30-03

If Only It were True!

TRASK
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 3/30/2003
Naughty, but well done.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/30/2003
oolala! Very passionate write naughty girly!!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/30/2003
Marylin,
I am opening the other window,
sensual beauty.
Peggy
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/30/2003
An impassioned lustful plea, Yeah!;-)Wonderfully written Marilyn...
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J 3/30/2003
Very tastefully done, Marilyn.

Love from India - Joel -
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 3/30/2003
Wooo sensual Marilyn...nicely done..floria
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 3/30/2003
Wonderful senuality here. Trish
Reviewed by William Bonilla 3/30/2003
thats pure passion
excellent write

William
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 3/30/2003
Whoa, Marilyn
Terrific sensuality here. Excellent!!


yf
tony
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 3/30/2003
Wonderful use of the sense of sight. Very passionate write.
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