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How can anyone really know
What my heart feels like
When the tears just flow
In an endless stream of pain
So many feelings inside
Taking my emotions for a ride
Without a map, no direction known
So I keep circling the same territory
Hoping for exploratory surgery
To break open that depository
Of love that needs to depart
This isn’t an easy task
Letting love go you thought was true
Being fooled like a stupid ass
Again and again and again
But let go I must find a way
To close this chapter
Before I waste another day
Looking for answers that aren’t there
This constant psychological abuse
Molding me like a battered woman
Holding on to love even when there is no use
Thinking tomorrow is another day
Each moment leaves me scarred and hot
Not knowing how many more pages are in this book
Of he loves me, he loves me not
Always looking for the one that says, “happily ever after”
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|Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
|Excellent write friend
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|love is never easy... excellent work!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh!! Sara girl I thing we need some "mooti" from a "witchdoctor" to heal our hearts....mixed with the "HeArT" thats breaking ours .....don't you think? This was one of those poems of yours that spoke volumes to me...let us leave that last page open in fill it with our combind love for THEE!!!!! The one who gets boiled in that Nice Big Black Mooti Pot of LOVE and both of Us with a wooden spoon Of Compassion in the Hand .....cheepers creepers...will that be fun........lol...Chin Up Girl...and take mine Up with yours...because it is still hanging down on my knees.
|Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
|Sara, I'm afraid I don't have a magic wand that I can wave, but I can tell you that it will get better. The hardest part of saying goodbye is MEANING it.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Beautifully done, Sara. Just know that when you are in love, you are insane, with blinders and ear muffs on so you can't see or hear all the things that are wrong, becaus you want things to be so right.
Really a good work.
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Dear Sara, A heartfelt write, with emotion. Thank You for sharing.