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Waltzing In The Moonlight (Sanil's Challenge)
by Marilyn Seray

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I recall that joyous tender moment
We shared - sweet dreams filled
With love and promises while we
Were waltzing in the moonlight

I felt the magic of the moonlight as
You held me close and danced me
Gracefully around the courtyard

I was floating in your arms – my feet
Were barely touching the ground.
the music was romantically emotional
the faint scent of gardenia was heady

With your lips softly brushing against
my cheek, you hummed Along to
Dr. Zhivago’s Laras Theme

Waltzing in the moonlight and sharing
My love with you, enjoying your company
Even if there’s nothing to do

I knew in my heart that all my tomorrows
would be filled with moments like that


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Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 4/4/2003
Yes indeed you nailed the challenge...Truly stunning Marilyn <-----My beautiful Mums name btw ;) Ty, Dani
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 4/3/2003
I love Lara's theme. Real romance here.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 4/3/2003
Marily this is fantastice..romantic..your future looks great from here...floria
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 4/3/2003
Love this, so smooth and flowing, like a silk ball gown.
Reviewed by Gumby Pokey (Reader) 4/3/2003
I flight of fancy to be sure and OMG I thought I was the only one who remembered Dr. Zhivago
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 4/2/2003
Beautiful write!
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 4/2/2003
enjoyed this
Reviewed by Jimmy Mills (Reader) 4/2/2003
Oh...Marilyn what a scene! I love this poem. I could just feel the closeness of the two as they waltzed in the courtyard. Excellent response to the challenge. Jim
Reviewed by A PAX 4/1/2003
I love it!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/31/2003
What a beautiful poem for the challenge!

Excellent, I enjoyed this so much,

Reviewed by Christine Morell 3/31/2003
This is beautiful Marilyn have met the challenge perfectly.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 3/31/2003
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/31/2003
This is so lovely!! Still busy working on
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci 3/31/2003
This is very smooth, and soooooo romantic! *sigh* This gives me that "if only" feeling!

Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/31/2003
very lovely response Marilyn...You sure know how to dance, in the moonlight...;-)
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) 3/31/2003
This is so lovely!! I enjoyed reading it...
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/31/2003
gr8 write, marilyn! you met sanil's challenge well! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J 3/31/2003
Nice write, Marilyn

Love from India - Joel -
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) 3/31/2003
Thankyou Marilyn Seray... This was indeed beautiful. Wish others too take keen interest in this write.

Thanks once again for the lovely participation.

Sanilnath G

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/31/2003
This is soooooooooo beautiful
Reviewed by Trixie Love 3/31/2003
GM Marilyn,
This is fantastic...
But then again, it always is...:)

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 3/31/2003
Marilyn, this is beautiful...Glad to see you took up Sanil's challenge. Wonderful write. ~Trish~
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 3/31/2003
Really enjoyed, bet your dance card is full.
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 3/31/2003
Good Morning, Marilyn
Lovely Poem, Very good outlook to your future.


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