|Reviewed by A PAX
|wish i wrote it|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|splendid write Jack!!|
|Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
|Wisdom, in rhyme!|
|Reviewed by Mary Cannon
|Well Dear Jack I am left without words
this is truly a piece written with much
wisdom and insight. a very good read, keep
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|You just keep bringing forth such wonder Jack...Great stuff indeed....Ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Wow..beautiful, deep, and so inspiring..
|Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
|This was incredible!!! ;) Silver|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|:) I am awed with this write, Jack... You have a beautiful mind.|
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|Jack, this poem is just what I needed today. It reminded me of all those who need me to stay. God must have been listening to me and sent your poem to answer my prayer. Thank you!|
|Reviewed by Victor Jensen
|Good poem as per usual but this one has a special message.|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|A beautiful poem Jack. Very inspiring.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Thoughtful. Reminds me of Methusala.|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Outstanding, my friend..
One of your best.
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|A very nice write Jack|
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|Wonderful! I enjoyed this so much...|
|Reviewed by Sandra Corona
|We all need something to hold on to. Lovely and deep poem.
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Eileen makes an excellent point. Enjoyed reading this. ~Joseph|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Fantastic metaphor Jack seniors get the notion they are not needed, this is the kind of encouragement they need! You ought to send it to a publisher of a seniors mag or somewhere...Fine work!|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
So beauiful, inspiring write.