|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Excellent, clever write.|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|enjoyed very much
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix
|okay oddball that I am sounds haunted with a ghostly loverLOL but very relaxing and sensual and beutiful nice job on this peom|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Debbie, well done.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|soothing, beautiful poem! no better way to end the day ;)|
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|Enjoyed reading this--especially like that ending!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Deb, you have such a natural talent and ease for this kind of write , this feels wonderful, reads pretty good too;-)|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Debtowel dried i brush out my hair
fold back the blankets and slide in bare
turn down your side invite you to stay
for you are naturally an element today by,"
nice way to end the day!!!!
fresh and beautiful........
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Debbie, this is a wonder.
Bravo, well done.