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| Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) |
4/2/2003 |
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Excellent Write ...
Superb write ...
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
4/2/2003 |
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Linda,
This so sad, it can make a bull bear cry
I love reading your assortment of wonderful writes
William
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
4/2/2003 |
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| Waaaaaaaaaaaaaah :``( This was very very sad. Wonderful job on this. Teresa |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
4/2/2003 |
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| You do these so well, Linda, it is scary the emotion you can write into them. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
4/2/2003 |
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| So indicative of your tender heart. |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
4/2/2003 |
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Dear Linda, Caring, a virtue you possess. Writing talent is also a forte. Beautiful piece, Linda.
God Bless You
Love
yf
tony |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/2/2003 |
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| (((linda))) heartbreaking and oh, so sad...but well written...(((HUGS))) *tears* and love, karla. :( |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/2/2003 |
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| sad write, but shows the innocence of a child who is only concerned for her little brother who is sick! wonderful emotions and feelings! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) :( |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
4/2/2003 |
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| What a beautiful prayer straight from your heart! I know that God will hear you and will answer. ~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
4/2/2003 |
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A sad and touching poem Linda
Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
4/2/2003 |
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Yes Linda Mae, you write from your heart. You write so well when using your empathic skills. This poem has meaning and depth. Freedom is relative. Remember. Do you know the Serenity Prayer. "God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, and to change the things I can?" A meaningful and deep prayer. So in the child who is dying above and in our own lives; we have a lot of accepting to do. Love you for your faith and your deliverance. This is who I know and who I care for. Good for you ! Angel of many!
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| Reviewed by Jack Roberts |
4/2/2003 |
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Such a sad write. Well done Linda.
Jack |
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| Reviewed by the phantom pheonix |
4/2/2003 |
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| this was so beautifully sad and heartwrenching awesome job on this one and people wonder why you are an angel of caring this poem definitly proves that |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
4/2/2003 |
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| Very sad LInda...good poem..Floria |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
4/2/2003 |
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| Linda, Beautiful write. So sad. My friend you need a pick me up poem. |
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