|Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
|Ah, what Mother Nature giveth, Father Time taketh away.
Clever piece, John...and, true!
|Reviewed by Claywoman
|John, I love you! You have captured what it is to grow older! ( you notice I didn't say old?) I still have most of my teeth, but I relate to canes, Bengay, and bifocals....hehe|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|You hotdog, we're not letting you out of here that easy. Super write...;-) Trish.|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Smoke some cigars!
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Hey John, This was quite wonderful! Feeling the age today are we? Its that damn snow! Wait till spring really blooms, and I bet you find you still can step quite lightly! After all, you are still so young at heart!
Love this poem,
|Reviewed by A PAX
|LOL thats adorable!
I love poems about aging because thats something we all do!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Amen....you aren't old until you are 100.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|LOLOLOL lately i've been feelin' my age...my bifocals quit focaling *grins*, my back gave out a looooong time ago, my arches done fell...and i'm havin' more and more "senior" moments...what did i come into this room for?? i always say this, no matter how bad i feel...anyday you wake up, ABOVE ground, and breathing, is a good day! adorable poem...love it very much! ((((HUGS)))) from an old 44 year old LOL...love, karla. :)|