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| Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore |
11/22/2003 |
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| what a poignant piece of work, to have someone who goes with you through life, who knows you better than anyone else...i love this piece... |
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| Reviewed by Jimmy Mills |
4/7/2003 |
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| Sherry--this was wonderful! I just hope that when I'm walking with a cane that I'm still that happy camper that I am now :-). Very well done my friend. Jim |
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| Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) |
4/6/2003 |
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What a lovely write friend ... What an end to say ...
Another day gone
And so few left to spend
With you here beside me
My husband, my friend
Excellent and you made it a great challenge..
Beautiful thought ... |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
4/6/2003 |
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Such beautiful sentiments in this Sherry. It meets Sanil's challenge perfectly and beyond. The rhyme and flow are perfect.
Love Chrissie xx |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/6/2003 |
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| Beautiful write Sherry!! |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
4/6/2003 |
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"But now as I teeter
And you walk with a cane
The violet sunsets
Bring sadness and pain "
Sherry...this really touched me...I am in my autumn years of life..now quite using a cane yet..but going into those years...and so this really touched me...having been married only to one man and our marriage surviving all problems....this touched my heart..and yes..the picture is lovely but hints of sadness...great poem..Floria
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| Reviewed by Victor Jensen |
4/6/2003 |
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| Like Jack says, beautiful rhyming poetry and nice tribute to a spouce. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
4/5/2003 |
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| Well done. Mine will look humble next to this one. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/5/2003 |
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| very lovely write Sherry, well crafted,great response to the challenge! |
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| Reviewed by Jack Roberts |
4/5/2003 |
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Beautiful write Sherry! I love the rhyme in your poetry.
Jack |
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