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Life's Breath
by Dee C.

Sunday, April 06, 2003

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Life’s Breath

Jagged breaths of cooled air
Grind within this nights fair
Blackened heart of loves pair
Leaves in trembling despair

Long lost words of passion
Found struggling admission
Toward a singular opinion
That left no question

Turn around and be found
Look up for light abounds
Swirling colors doth surround
Only to fall back to the ground

Cloaked inside this victims tomb
Shrouded in sins gloom
Is it safe that we all assume
That life began within one womb

For open eyes will behold
What we have all been told
That ones yearning leaves you cold
Only his love does enfold.

Dee © 2003/4/6

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Reviewed by 4/7/2003
How I agree with Peggy. Lovely write.
Reviewed by jude forese 4/6/2003
very well done poem... enjoyed the experience...
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 4/6/2003
A beautiful write.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 4/6/2003
This was quite lovely, I love the message you have written here,


Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 4/6/2003
~Dee C,
ah so beautiful
For open eyes will behold
What we have all been told
That ones yearning leaves you cold
Only his love does enfold. "
Reviewed by John Bidwell 4/6/2003
Wow, haunting indeed.
Great poem Dee. Of course I especially loved that picture.
Reviewed by Brittany Renée 4/6/2003
Wow.. ghostly beautiful this is, Dee. Love the photograph, complements the verses very well.

Warm Love
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 4/6/2003
Beautifully done.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 4/6/2003
So inspiring and beautiful, Dee. Well written!
Reviewed by Christine Morell 4/6/2003
A wonderful message Dee. Well written with an excellent rhyme scheme.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 4/6/2003
Excellent imagery..I like thi very much Dee has a ring to it
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/6/2003
Excellent imagery...beautiful message!
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 4/6/2003
Great imageries and good usage of words. I like this.

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
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