|Reviewed by Jimmy Mills
|John--your work said alot in a few words. It's exceptionally written. Nice Tanka. Never tried it before. I guess that now is a good time to start :-). Thanks for sharing. Jim|
|Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
|Thank you friend this is indeed beautiful ... thanks a lot for this beautiful lines|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
I have not yet to write a tanka, Am looking forward to my first.....thanks for sharing
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
Absolutely beautiful with so few words. 10+
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent! You have a gift for succinct poems that tell a story ...|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was excellent! Great response to the challenge!
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|This is really beautiful in so few words.|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Excellent moving poetry. Wonderful challenge piece.|
|Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman
|I wonder at this challenge. It seems I've missed out on it. Well, this looks like a good bit of poetry.
Thanks for taking the time with "Catholic," the greatest profundinties are simplistic on the surface, some say.
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
excellent verses for the challenge
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Well done. I am going to throw away my offering. Bravo.|