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sunset beach -- sanil's challenge
by john k zimmerman

Sunday, April 06, 2003

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a tanka
to answer
a challenge

Crimson’d purple clouds
look down upon paired lovers
strolling hand in hand-
while empty handed i walk
the darkening shadowed beach

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Reviewed by Jimmy Mills (Reader) 4/8/2003
John--your work said alot in a few words. It's exceptionally written. Nice Tanka. Never tried it before. I guess that now is a good time to start :-). Thanks for sharing. Jim
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) 4/7/2003
Thank you friend this is indeed beautiful ... thanks a lot for this beautiful lines
Reviewed by William Bonilla 4/6/2003
fantastic write
I have not yet to write a tanka, Am looking forward to my first.....thanks for sharing

Reviewed by Nancy D. 4/6/2003
Absolutely beautiful with so few words. 10+

Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/6/2003
Excellent! You have a gift for succinct poems that tell a story ...
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 4/6/2003
This was excellent! Great response to the challenge!

Reviewed by Melissa Rives 4/6/2003
This is really beautiful in so few words.
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 4/6/2003
Excellent moving poetry. Wonderful challenge piece.
Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman 4/6/2003
I wonder at this challenge. It seems I've missed out on it. Well, this looks like a good bit of poetry.

Thanks for taking the time with "Catholic," the greatest profundinties are simplistic on the surface, some say.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 4/6/2003
excellent verses for the challenge
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 4/6/2003
Well done. I am going to throw away my offering. Bravo.
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