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sunset beach -- sanil's challenge
by john k zimmerman

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a tanka
to answer
a challenge



Crimson’d purple clouds
look down upon paired lovers
strolling hand in hand-
while empty handed i walk
the darkening shadowed beach


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Reviewed by Jimmy Mills (Reader)
John--your work said alot in a few words. It's exceptionally written. Nice Tanka. Never tried it before. I guess that now is a good time to start :-). Thanks for sharing. Jim
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Thank you friend this is indeed beautiful ... thanks a lot for this beautiful lines
Reviewed by William Bonilla
fantastic write
excellent,
I have not yet to write a tanka, Am looking forward to my first.....thanks for sharing

William
Reviewed by Nancy D.
John,
Absolutely beautiful with so few words. 10+

Nancy
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Excellent! You have a gift for succinct poems that tell a story ...
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
This was excellent! Great response to the challenge!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Melissa Rives
This is really beautiful in so few words.
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
Excellent moving poetry. Wonderful challenge piece.
Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman
I wonder at this challenge. It seems I've missed out on it. Well, this looks like a good bit of poetry.

Thanks for taking the time with "Catholic," the greatest profundinties are simplistic on the surface, some say.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
john,
excellent verses for the challenge
Peg
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Well done. I am going to throw away my offering. Bravo.

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