|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Hmmm...Tony, so much sadness here. Deeply felt|
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Very deep made my heart pound .......|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
I hate seeing you so
down once again...
You will be in my prayers tonight...
|Reviewed by Jacqueline VanZandbeek
|Tony I feel your pain. I am with you.
It is easier said than done...some people say snap out of it...well I got tired of hearing that. because you don't just snap out of it. That is impossible to just make it all go away. There are ways of dealing with what you are going through.
Peace, love and joy be with you Tony.
|Reviewed by A PAX
Does writing like this help you out of your gloom????
I do hope so!
the sun always rises
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|i hope you find your way back into the light soon, tony. the pits of dispair is an awful place to be, and what an awful feeling! you are in my thoughts and prayers. love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :( sad, emotional write! well done!|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|The pit of despair, how well and deeply I feel this in your moving poem,
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Sometimes we find ourselve is the darkness and it is at those times we need to call on the light to show us the way out of hell.|
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix
|Depression is like this so much it is scary so is loneliness awesome dark and eerily scary poem here nice job on it|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|A very dark and sad poem Tony, very well written 'I understand your words.
Love Chrissie x
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Tony I "felt" this...as I have been there before...but there is a way out....look to the light my friend..profound write...floria|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|A cold, dark write. Excellent, but remember where their is darkness, light shall creep. ;-) ~Trish~|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Tony, chilling write!|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Tony, excellent write. Into each life comes a little darkness.|
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|Jeez, Tony, have yu been writing my biography again. Great write! I felt every word and it hurt!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a darkened state to be surrounded by... great write!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Hey Tiger!!! Sorry Tony...where is that spirit of the tiger to fight back?..mmmmmmmm.....Come on now snap out of it and make fun of all the bad things.....just simply turn the hurt into a joke and you will see the stupid reality that it was not as bad as it seems....
Thats what I am doing and I think it helped me a little..Come on smile at me!!! Look I am smiling back at you >;o))))) bigtime
Your partner in paaaaaaaain!!!
|Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza
|let there be light..... i'm sure there will be. excellent piece here...|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Perfect description of depression. Well done.|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Great dark and gloomy
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|So chilling and dark, yet very well-written! Great job, Tony.....