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The cold glass
by the phantom pheonix

Tuesday, April 08, 2003

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She held her hand
Onto the cold glass
As the rain
Traced her fingers
In wet trails
As the rain
Beat the rhythm
Of her pain
Upon the car's roof
Lightning flashes
Bringing back memories
Of shattering glass
Voices yelling
Fists flying
Striking
Tires squealing
Shower of sparks
Screams ring out
As the air is silent
The rain is gone
Her hand
Held still
Against the cold glass
As she trembles
And screams
At the dead body
Of her mother
As she scrambles
To free herself
From the overturned car
As gasoline pours out
In a river
Flowing down
To the downed
Electrical lines
And her hands
Beat
On the cold glass
As the gas
Catches fire
And races
Races back.


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Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 4/8/2003
This is good writing Chad...always go with your gut feeling and write what you feel...write what makes you happy..not what makes other people happy...this is very very good...excellent..floria
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 4/8/2003
yup. right category, chad! what a screamer of a write! AAAAH! :0 love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) to you, dear chad! :)
Reviewed by Trixie Love 4/8/2003
I am with everyone
else on this write...

Excellent job...

Trixie :)
Reviewed by Josephine Bohen 4/8/2003
yup horror it is
well done
josie
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 4/8/2003
Well done....horror.
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 4/8/2003
Great Chad, very strong images. I'm there scramblin'
Reviewed by A PAX 4/8/2003
Your good!!!

very!!
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J 4/8/2003
There you go again boy, Another tops!!!

Love form India - Joel -
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J 4/8/2003
You paint a great picture though it is heart wrenching sight.
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 4/8/2003
Good job!
Jack
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 4/8/2003
So Dark and intense! Your poetry is so alive and vital,

Excellent,

Reindeer
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 4/8/2003
Chad you make these dark ones live!
Reviewed by g g (Reader) 4/8/2003
Excellent imagery I love this
Huggs
Lady G.
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 4/8/2003
Your writing is much improved, not that it was ever bad.
Reviewed by Marlene Dawn 4/8/2003
Great imagery. Thanks...

*Marlene*
Reviewed by Madame X 4/8/2003
Images here were clear and concise. Powerful write.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 4/8/2003
p.p. excellent imagery. Could feel the anguish, fright and tension in this piece. Very well done.
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 4/8/2003
This is stunning. Excellent imagery. Superb writing.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 4/8/2003
Wow Chad this one is screaming Erica is right.
peg
Reviewed by Sharon Williamson (Reader) 4/8/2003
Wow each time I read your words I wish I could read faster.
Excellent....again,
Sharon;)
Reviewed by Erica Ivory 4/8/2003
Wow... This just took my breath away... Images screaming through my mind.. Well done!!!
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