Child Of God
by Carissa J. Brookens
Tuesday, April 08, 2003
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A friend of mine, likes it better when my writes are happy, so this one is for him. Hope you like it, Sir! |
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You, sir, are a child of God,
One of the greatest I know.
You are His gift to Earth.
A gift full of gentleness
And great strength.
God’s path has tested you time and time again,
But I have a feeling you took on each challenge
And gave it your all to conquer it.
Each challenge most likely helped you to find
A new found strength inside yourself.
God may not have given you the straight & narrow path,
But He has used your path to make you the man you are today.
Any disappointing times or possible failures you’ve hidden inside,
But you also have this unseen beauty inside.
Truth is a trait that seems to be easily instilled in you.
Wisdom you seem to hold tucked away
For that certain time when you need it most.
You are one child of God
That’s willing to listen while we talk
And do everything in your power to help.
God ever uses you to lit up the world.
You truly are a work of art,
Especially when you lighten the day with a simply “hi”.
You, sir, are a child of God
One of the greatest I know.
You’re one amazing person
And I’m proud to call you, my friend.
04.08.2003 (For LC)
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| Reviewed by Carissa Brookens |
4/9/2003 |
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Thank you both. I am glad you both like it.
Jimmy, this is my way of saying thank you for everything you've done for me. I appreciate it all. However, I didn't mean to make you cry. *hugs my friends*
~*~CJ~*~ |
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| Reviewed by Jimmy Mills |
4/8/2003 |
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| Okay...You've finally done it CJ. I'm whiping the diamonds off my eyes. This was incredible! I just don't know what to say. I am completely speechless. You have just shown me your true self. One that is full of goodness, respect, and happiness. Your inner self has finally surfaced and boy did it surface well. I could never repay you for what you have just done for me. I will continue to whipe my tears away. Thank you very much. LC |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
4/8/2003 |
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CJ..this is the most perfect and beautiful poem I have read yet! Jimmy deserves this so much! I love this! Outstanding description of a truly beautiful person.
cheers dear!
He will love it!
Reindeer |
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