I've REACHED my DEMISE (poem) by Angela R Velez on AuthorsDen

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I've REACHED my DEMISE by Angela R Velez Tuesday, April 08, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan no words today before the poem i hope i still got my touch! enjoy xoxoxo
I've spoken about it time and before I am no longer trapped, death is at my door I close my eyes and I see my place high in the sky My heart is in his palm and my soul is waiting to be called I'm not fighting this fear anymore The pain inside is to strong to endure* It's choking my soul, so my words will never be told Tupac said it the best: "I loved all who were positive , in the event of my demise." I am no longer trapped, I am a free soul Standing over my body which will now be placed six feet Leaving everyone standing over me I loved you all I felt it inside I knew it was my time Today was the day The day that I've reached my demise

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Reviewed by jerry cruz (Reader)	4/21/2003

damn! outer body experience or doppleganger assumed your identity and it was someone else taking that dirt nap, be that as it may, very good, it's the type of poetry I really can get into...read my 'don isidro'.




Reviewed by Birdie	4/10/2003

This blew me away .......loved the whole entirety of the poem !!!




Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)	4/8/2003

Angela, Oh this was so chillibng and expressed in darkness excellent. Peg




Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson	4/8/2003

Hope this is not real Great dark poem Sometimes we all have to express darkness..




Reviewed by Ois�n Breen	4/8/2003

keep it up.




Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)	4/8/2003

This was chilling Angela...kind of like you were at your own funeral..it is very sad...I hope you are ok and this what it is ....a dark write..floria




Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)	4/8/2003

Well done. Enjoyed the reading.