|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|most interesting and most enjoyable!!|
|Reviewed by Buddy Angel
|You could not have said it better.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Well I love your indecent sounds! This was quite wonderful!
|Reviewed by Larry Skahill
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|I always love what you have to say|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
This is great, excellent write
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|You know how to make me laugh.
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
You rock always.
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|what? you mean there are rules to writing poetry? oops..i think you got it going on...just spill it out there...|
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
|HE heee heee LOL i sorry but this was one hilarious rant awesome job on it|
|Reviewed by Oisín Breen
|a little over long but
the word play its most interesting and most enjoyable
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Josie you know you rule! so damned undecent you're loved, loved by all;-)(I sneak in a lot of shit;-)|
|Reviewed by Charles McKenzie (Reader)
|fuck the red lines
way to go Josie--fuck censorshit
|Reviewed by john zimmerman
|inspite of the red lines,
i keep mine turned off,
english is a most malable,
and acquisitive language.
you want to makeup words..
go for it !
|Reviewed by Sage Largo (Reader)
|You go girl, I feel by calling myself a writer(cough,cough) I am entitled to my own
vocabulary. All the best Sage
|Reviewed by a- maryllis
|To that I will say this: we're writers and we have the right to write whatever we write this one's cool Josie...love it AGAIN!
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|HAHAHAHAHAHA I do that too...I ignore the red squigley lines...but I have a friend who is a teacher and she is always all over me about my grammar and punctuation...I cant run from it...LOL..and Josie...that is poetry...we write what we feel dont we...so who cares what the subject is...to each his own...loved this...floria|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|You are a crazy, brilliant woman. I put this with the 'potato salad' thingy.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|(((josie))) i love your josie words...unindecent sounds good to me! great rant...don't leave...please???? (((HUGS))) and love, karla. e-mail me...please???|