|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|I liked "twitching in the belly".....so vivid. The last stanza you wrote pulls everything together JUST so... Teresa|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Good Morning, Debby
A lovely poem of your self expression.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Such wonderful imagery!|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Beautiful write...great image. Very thoughtful!|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Love the images
Well worth reading......
|Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
|Cosmicaly beautiful, Deb...|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Most Interestingly So!
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|wonderful write Debby
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
beautiful astral display so beautiful
|Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
|Nice flight of imagination. Enjoyed this.|
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix
|this wass interesting and intruigning ghreat job on it|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Debby you have been soaring lately, flirting in the celestial...I love it!;-)|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
in patterns and hues
that feel so warm within..."
Beautiful lines throughout.
|Reviewed by Oisín Breen
|ah. Very well thought out piece?
its interesting and it keeps a single coherent general theme