Vicious Tongues and the Damage Done
by Tyler Joseph Wiseman
Thursday, April 10, 2003
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By your slanderous tilt I am wounded
more grievously than any brilliant spear
which, ordained from the heaven's clarion oath,
might strike me down as Hippocrates, Persephone, Proteus falling to the sea
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Your silent language is an insidious succor,
courting mischief with malice
and while I am starved by the wonder
of all these hideous silences
your monstrous mechanizations grind my heart to sand
and, so undone, I am fearful for it to beat again
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With all this maligned devotion you strike at me
as it were I who cleft the devil's hoove
and yet, for all this loathing, it's breadth, depth, scope, and meter
I can only strike with compassion in turn
for fear is fickle in all it's jade devices
and ruled over by the perseverance of patience
and the insurmountable temperance of words
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| Reviewed by Candida Eittreim |
9/27/2003 |
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Your silent language is an insidious succor,
courting mischief with malice
and while I am starved by the wonder
of all these hideous silences
your monstrous mechanizations grind my heart to sand
and, so undone, I am fearful for it to beat again
Very taut crisp writing. Well done. A bitter truth couched in wickedly sharp prose.
Candida
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
9/26/2003 |
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The first line gets my attention.
And my eyes are held to the last word. Some great words btw.
Oh, such divine language...Very well written.
Ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
9/19/2003 |
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| nice poetically truly nice . G |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
7/10/2003 |
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..you never cease to amaze me Tyler..your talent is colossal...indeed..
Vesna |
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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
7/6/2003 |
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| Masterful write...when used with malice words can be more destructive than man made weapons. ~Z~ |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/10/2003 |
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| well done... nice syntax... |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
4/10/2003 |
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| Profound write Tyler. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
4/10/2003 |
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| Well done, Tyler. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
4/10/2003 |
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I like this, Tyler! Your choice of words is excellent!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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