|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|An enchanting piece ... I love the stars!
|Reviewed by Tenshi Zenaku
|Another wonderful piece work JK!
You should be proud of yourself.
|Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|"...And live for our season, the Spring
The time of rebirth
Where your heart can shed it's skin
Drink this moment
It will beome part of you forever..."
Beautiful lines. Well done.
[You can go to your original document posting and correct. Just click on the poem title and it will open the doc for you.]
|Reviewed by Mistress Nataku
|The word up there is supposed to be elixar....sorry ^_^0|