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Zenith Elliott

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Popular Poetry (Relationships)
  1.  Life As I Now Know It
  2.  Never Knew Your Name
  3.  trusting others...
  4.  a forever that never arrived...
  5.  44/40
  6.  Unbalanced Relationship
  7.  Everything is Right
  8.  Thank You Baby For Loving Me
  9.  You & I
  10.  Soft Spot
  11.  The Meeting
  12.  I am so VERY sorry, Dad...
  13.  Love With The Proper Person
  14.  Communication Today has Gone Astray
  15.  Making Unfeigned Love
  16.  Momma's Boy
  17.  Face The Music
  18.  Mistress O The Bottle
  19.  CREEP
  20.  X-Factor



Let the countdown begin...
by Zenith Elliott

Thursday, April 10, 2003

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Once, twice, three times or more,
I've said the words now here's ...
THE DOOR!

Four, five, six reasons exist,
Our lips no longer wish to kiss.

Seven, eight, nine hundred times,
the Lies you've told will never rhyme.

Ten, eleven, twelve thousand regrets,
those little games I chose to forget.

Thirteen, fourteen, fifteen lonely nights........excuses ignored now we
FIGHT!

Sixteen, seventeen, eighteen million ways...to make you Squirm throughout,
each and every Day.

Nineteen and twenty the jokes on you,
MY FREEDOMS FOUND AND YOUR SAD AND BLUE!

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Reviewed by The Dove 11/25/2004
Fabulous, witty, and cute
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 4/11/2003
You sound like Iraqi people speaking to Sadam.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight* 4/11/2003
Interesting write ... no mistaking the emotions. Hope you eventually kissed and made up ... that's the fun part! ~Joseph
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 4/11/2003
Hi < Nice to meet you.....lol
Thanks for your reviews....see you are from germany..welcome to my page and thank you for this fun write....I enjoyed it very much!!
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 4/11/2003
Hahahahahaha, this is sooooooo good. Funny, creative and strong. I love it.
Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente 4/11/2003
Very clever,Z. You must have been really pissed when you wrote this one. Whatever works!
Bonnie
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 4/10/2003
Ha! Good for you! I loved this poem,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 4/10/2003
This is a great ditty! I'll be back to read more of your stuff!
Reviewed by Dove (Reader) 4/10/2003
I like it Zenith..!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/10/2003
Wow Z that is so creative!I love it;-)!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 4/10/2003
I love this ! ! ! !
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 4/10/2003
Oh very very good!!!!!
Love the last line.
peggy
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