Let the countdown begin...
by Zenith Elliott
Thursday, April 10, 2003
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Once, twice, three times or more,
I've said the words now here's ...
Four, five, six reasons exist,
Our lips no longer wish to kiss.
Seven, eight, nine hundred times,
the Lies you've told will never rhyme.
Ten, eleven, twelve thousand regrets,
those little games I chose to forget.
Thirteen, fourteen, fifteen lonely nights........excuses ignored now we
Sixteen, seventeen, eighteen million ways...to make you Squirm throughout,
each and every Day.
Nineteen and twenty the jokes on you,
MY FREEDOMS FOUND AND YOUR SAD AND BLUE!
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|Reviewed by Angry Dove
|Fabulous, witty, and cute|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|You sound like Iraqi people speaking to Sadam.|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Interesting write ... no mistaking the emotions. Hope you eventually kissed and made up ... that's the fun part! ~Joseph|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Hi < Nice to meet you.....lol
Thanks for your reviews....see you are from germany..welcome to my page and thank you for this fun write....I enjoyed it very much!!
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|Hahahahahaha, this is sooooooo good. Funny, creative and strong. I love it.|
|Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente
|Very clever,Z. You must have been really pissed when you wrote this one. Whatever works!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Ha! Good for you! I loved this poem,
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|This is a great ditty! I'll be back to read more of your stuff!|
|Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
|I like it Zenith..!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wow Z that is so creative!I love it;-)!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|I love this ! ! ! !|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Oh very very good!!!!!
Love the last line.