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|Reviewed by V. A. MCCLOUD
|Richard, very well said. Their are many people who walk to close to hell today, not realizing any day they could fall permanently in hell; which at that time their is no removal of the pain.|
|Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
|Great write Richard.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|excellent emotions !!!|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This one was truly a masterpiece, I felt this one deeply,
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Great write Richard.
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
like rolling your sleves up and showing
us you inner refecltions
|Reviewed by Mary Cannon
|I loved the flow of this poem and full of
understanding a very good write...
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
This one hits hard! It is very real, seems we have all danced with the devil on an occasion or two.
|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|richard, written so well, one can sensthe 'lost'-- honest, from within, and raw, yet beautiful... 'seven years' in hell and some inside searching so well-versed, agree w/all so far, and yeah, Elizabeth...probably! sigh...ah, richard, you seem to have such a sense of reflection and wonder if it is part of 'change'...maybe, sigh, damn....so well said, painful, tho'--- so kind of hoping that at some point there will be a follow up... you know--" and found" (or finding, or 'found', ((r.))...You have such a way w/poetry, and you write raw scars and memory so well, as you write so well of so much...yes, I hope to see a 'found' poem...you know? why?!?-- because this one for your person/poet's sake, That's why...yes! that's why i wish you a follow-up, a 'finding', found'...yes..
this one, so well done...'the devil was being extra nice', wow...some great lines and again a poem, all too haunting, and as always, so, so damn good!!!
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|Total eclipse of the heart ..
Trying to fill it with everything and everyone.. every sin...
But it doesn't work.. Does it?
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|A very good, reflective poem of penitence, Richard! Well done.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
I bet you 'sin' well. [smiles]
I like your poem.
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|richard, i think this one of your best|