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Black In Darkness
by Marilyn Seray

Friday, April 11, 2003

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Dreaming in the dark
of me being in the dark
I see nothing but black
in darkness, so I close
my eyes and it’s still dark

Stumbling towards the
window, I feel for the
shade and pull it up –
there is nothing but the
dark blackness of night

I stick my hand out and
something grabs my arm
I can’t see it but it feels
cold

The arm pulls me through
the window and leads me
blindly toward a tiny speck
of white light in the distance,
but it doesn’t change in size
on my approach

As quick as the speed of light
a Gush of wind blows the
tiny light out

I scream out in the blackness.
the wind shrills my voice
and shuts it off quickly at its
peak

I awake in the dark and find
myself behind my closed eyes
in the dark

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Reviewed by Lynn Barry 4/21/2003
Kind of makes me understand how it might be to be blind...very nice..
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 4/13/2003
You've unveiled the power of darkness!
Reviewed by Trixie Love 4/12/2003
Hi Marilyn,
What a great write...
However, I am with
Ron...I have to have it pitch dark at night....

Hugs,
Trixie
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 4/12/2003
sounds like a bad nightmare to me.......put some hay in your room to feed the mare if you dare
love
tinka
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 4/12/2003
good, dark write! i can identify with william bonilla..i, too, sleep with a light on; i am also scared of the dark, and so is my twin sister, karla! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) :)
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 4/12/2003
Good Morning, Marilyn
A very powerful write
I hope You see light soon. Be Well


yf
tony
Reviewed by Christine Morell 4/12/2003
Excellent, Marilyn ...chilling.
Chrissie
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader) 4/12/2003
dude i dont know if I want to go to ssleep tonight or not this was damn scary it was awesoemly eerie and horror filled nice job on this poem
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 4/12/2003
Marilyn, you thrilled me with this one, no crap, I ate it write up and never crashed so hard as when I read the last lines. Picking myself up and putting on my shades.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 4/12/2003
Wow grabbed and held all my interest, great write.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 4/11/2003
Good one...
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 4/11/2003
4-11-03

Most Interestingly so!

TRASK
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 4/11/2003
Scary! It has to be black dark when I go to bed.
Your becoming one the great one's Marylin..
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 4/11/2003
Oh yes, hauntingly beautiful,

lovely,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Angela Denney (Reader) 4/11/2003
Wow ypur a really good writer im not genna be able to sleep to night!
Reviewed by Theresa Koch 4/11/2003
"I scream out in the blackness.
the wind shrills my voice
and shuts it off quickly at its
peak"

I love this!!!!
Reviewed by William Bonilla 4/11/2003
Very good, I hate the darkness, still sleep with night light....lol
excellent write

William
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/11/2003
wow! "behind my closed eyes". What have you been reading Marilyn, I want to read it too;-)Excellent as all your work has been lately, really soaring!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 4/11/2003
Marylin,
excellent
haunting and dark
"I awake in the dark and find
myself behind my closed eyes
in the dark "
Peggy
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