|Reviewed by Lynn Barry
|Kind of makes me understand how it might be to be blind...very nice..|
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|You've unveiled the power of darkness!|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
What a great write...
However, I am with
Ron...I have to have it pitch dark at night....
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|sounds like a bad nightmare to me.......put some hay in your room to feed the mare if you dare
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|good, dark write! i can identify with william bonilla..i, too, sleep with a light on; i am also scared of the dark, and so is my twin sister, karla! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) :)|
|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Good Morning, Marilyn
A very powerful write
I hope You see light soon. Be Well
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Excellent, Marilyn ...chilling.
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
|dude i dont know if I want to go to ssleep tonight or not this was damn scary it was awesoemly eerie and horror filled nice job on this poem|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Marilyn, you thrilled me with this one, no crap, I ate it write up and never crashed so hard as when I read the last lines. Picking myself up and putting on my shades.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Wow grabbed and held all my interest, great write.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Most Interestingly so!
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Scary! It has to be black dark when I go to bed.
Your becoming one the great one's Marylin..
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh yes, hauntingly beautiful,
|Reviewed by Angela Denney (Reader)
|Wow ypur a really good writer im not genna be able to sleep to night!|
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|"I scream out in the blackness.
the wind shrills my voice
and shuts it off quickly at its
I love this!!!!
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Very good, I hate the darkness, still sleep with night light....lol
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|wow! "behind my closed eyes". What have you been reading Marilyn, I want to read it too;-)Excellent as all your work has been lately, really soaring!|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
haunting and dark
"I awake in the dark and find
myself behind my closed eyes
in the dark "