Reflections
by Linda M Hill
Saturday, April 12, 2003
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Night will be here soon, shadows
gather around me
Guess I should go home but
Its so damn lonely
I get tired of rambling around in
That big house all alone
The wife died years ago and all
The kids are gone
Every days the same for me
Nothing changes here
I sit on this cold , hard bench
Wiping away a tear
Never knew that loneliness
Echoes so loud
I feel it eating me alive, even
In a crowd
Memories, thats all I have of
My kids and my wife
They meant EVERYTHING to
Me, my soul, my life
What I would give for just one
More tender touch
One more sweet smile from the
Lady I love so much
We used to sit out on the
Porch sipping iced tea
Kids playing on the swings
Making a memory
We danced in the rain
Loved every day
Now I sit here alone with
Nothing much to say
Every days the same for me
Nothing changes here
I sit on this cold, hard bench
Wiping away a tear......
© Linda Hill 2002
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Authors note: If you are fortunate enough to have your parents, please let them know you love them..visit them...take them places....ease some of their loneliness. I have lost both my parents...and I cannot bring back one day to tell them I love them. If your parents are alive, please give them a hug for me......
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
4/22/2003 |
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Oh Linda,
How deep this one
touched my heart...
Both of my parents
are gone as well...
Now I feel like no bodys little girl...
Beautiful...
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by the phantom pheonix |
4/12/2003 |
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| i really shouldnt talk to my parents so I give you the hug instead my sweet angel friend |
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
4/12/2003 |
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| I loved this poem. I consider myself very lucky, I live with my dad and my daughter, so I get to say I love you to them every day, and I talk, or leave messages of "I love you," to both my sons almost every day. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/12/2003 |
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| *tears* my mom died 13 years ago...my dad's recovering from bypass surgery...and still has to go through back surgery to take out a tumor...i will call him tonight. :( wise, wise words, my dear, and i'm sorry you don't have your parents...i'll adopt you, if you want. :) (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
4/12/2003 |
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So very beautiful, and wise,
Love this one,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
4/12/2003 |
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| So very true! Inspiring write! |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
4/12/2003 |
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Hi Linda, Very poignant. Excellent write Ms.Blue eyes.
love
yf
tony |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/12/2003 |
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| poignant and sad! my daddy is in ohio, and i am here. can't go walking to ohio from texas; it isn't just across the street! HA! :) but when i do go home this summer, i will give him a hug from you, okay? love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
4/12/2003 |
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| I will give you a hug my Lady. My parents are also gone. So come here and hold me for a while untile we find solace in each others arms. Love you. Bill |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
4/12/2003 |
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| Wise and so very poignant. |
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