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  1.  It all comes down to this
  2.  Taken its Toll...

I feel...Dead
by Kacie Rahm

Sunday, April 13, 2003

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This was brought on by the need for a new style, this is not a style yet tried by me, I hope it fits together and flows okay, it wa a risk stepping out of my comfort zone.

I feel trapped,I cant adapt to being
Stabbed in the back slipping through the cracks.

I feel betrayed, so afraid of being
Accused, hidden, when only you know I didn't.

I feel disguised, I despise being
Covered by a shield, My true self never revealed.

I feel deceit, I'm so incomplete being
Torn apart by you,got a broken heart from you.

I feel cheated, I've been defeated being
Kicked when I'm weak, I can't even speak.

I feel pain,not this again,you're being
Unfair, unaware? No,you know you cause despair.

I feel used, I was confused being
Led in the wrong direction,with no protection.

I feel gone, nobody to lean on being
Told the words I dread,you killed me I'm dead.

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Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 4/14/2003
Imagination rings the bell of knowledge; art respond to intuition, emotions reaches the

heart... The Poet interprets the sounds, poemizes the feelings and dares to poetize a new

form, and "I feel...Dead” is live! I read it, I feel it, I learn from it, and I say, EUREKA!

A true Poet is commanding the CLASS!

I greet You, Poet Kaci Riann, You are a true picture of real Poet!

Blest be Your heart.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 4/14/2003
Stepping out of your comfort zone is good for you. Try it more often. A comfort zone only locks you out of all your possibilities.Good expression.
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 4/13/2003
This is a fantastic poem!
Reviewed by jude forese 4/13/2003
always explore new structural modes and poetic veins of thought and you will be successful as you are in this poem... well done!
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader) 4/13/2003
Excellent, Kaci. It's great to try new styles. A lot of poets get stuck in one style and one theme.
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader) 4/13/2003
This was a wonderful poem and it awesoem that you expanding you type of genres I try to also
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 4/13/2003
Its great that you are expanding in your attempts. Great write and I am looking forward to reading more.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/13/2003
wonderful poem, good for you to try all genre's, this makes a well rounded poet.
Reviewed by Sarah Mathews 4/13/2003
Excellent poem kaci! It flowed perfectly!

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