|Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Firstly, I cant say how much I appreciate you drinking my words, the many kind things you say, mean much my friend, for I deem them earnest of deep. With that said sweet maiden to this piece, if it had no more than just these words, it would have satisfied my hunger of day. Well done...
In sincereity I leave you this day,
Rodney Evan Bohen
In feeding it thought is the food of the soul
to embrace what may come
is the strength to be whole.
|Reviewed by J. Murphy
|Wonderful feel. J.|
|Reviewed by Jimmy Holder
|Open eyes to the mirror and maybe you’ll find
what lies deep ‘neath reflection
is simply your mind.
(deep stuff here ... and so true!!!!)
- Superb writing!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Excellent, kept me from the first word to the last!
|Reviewed by Peter sprenkeler
|Great write.....damn great!
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Well done Z|
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|Well done, Melissa. I always enjoy reading your work it has such spark and vitality.|
|Reviewed by Marco Landi
|"Dizzy" is a very powerful voyage with a great cadenza.. brava|
|Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|I have enjoyed reading "Dizzy". It is a poem that was poemized with matured emotions
and poetized with words of knowledge.
I Salute the Author of'" Dizzy", Poet Melissa C. Rives.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|I truly think you wrote this one for me Melissa.
Excellent perseption :)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|very good tone, flow and direction... it made me so dizzy i can see straight ;)|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|not too dizzy to write fantastic poems;-)Stunning!|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|The last two lines are awesome
I'll never ask.........hee,
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|I think I'm on the same ride Melissa. As always great work with depth and much thought.....Great stuff indeed.......Ty, Dani|