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i'm a loser
by Steve Patterson

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i'm a loser
a no good
2 timin' boozer
a chooser of choices
from strange voices
there in my head
floow the leader
just bein' lead
always choosin' wrong
always singin' a song
alway's bein' where
i don't belong

alway's losin'
alway's cruisin'
down the path
of least resistance
with the insistance
with the thought
i'm losin'
but i'll win
but when?

livin' with what i bought
still seekin'
what i sought
still dealin'
with what i wrought

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Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 4/14/2003
(((steve))) you are not a may have made some bad choices, but you, my friend, are most definately NOT a loser...we've all had those times. excellent outpouring of emotion...well done! (((HUGS))) and get to feeling better, karla. :)
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 4/14/2003
I had those days, and you have expressed it so well in this excellent poem,

Reviewed by Jodie 4/14/2003
Steve, you are what
you say!!!
You always write of
self pity!!
If you don't like your ways, than do something about it!!!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 4/14/2003
you are NOT a loser, steve! i have complete faith in you, and you are a winner in my eyes! heartfelt poem full of raw emotion; well done! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((((HUGS))))) to you, steve! :)

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