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by Paul Berube
Tuesday, April 15, 2003

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This poem was written out of frustration. After many times trying to write a poem without rhyme. (free verse)I have sinced learned but this was the outcome of my frustration. My first love was rhyme. Sssshhhh! don't tell my wife.(lol) Sorry Love.

Meters, liters, weights and measures,
they're all the same to me.
Fame, fortune, wealth and treasures,
are futures to foresee.

Ideas, plans, works and schemes,
are just to name a few.
Wishes, hopes, desires and dreams,
no less will ever do.

Basis, structures, frames and foundations,
have never turned me on.
Desire, want, love and duration,
will last when we are gone.

Poe, Keats, Dickenson and Frost,
Have long since passed away.
Santana, Madonna, Prince and The Boss,
are artists I heard today.

As you can see, from lines above,
I tried alot today.
Maybe, I'll stick to my first love,
cause words I cannot sway.

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Reviewed by Sheila Roy 5/1/2008
It takes a lot of talent to get words to rhyme beautifully. I'm glad you decided to embrace your first love, Paul! Great poem. Your frustration doesn't come across as much as your love for rhyme does. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 4/15/2003
Hey, I liked this one so much! Ha, I don't try to rhyme, either it does, or it doesn't..


Excellent,

Reindeer
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/15/2003
Paul many would kill to have your rhythm and rhyme, so keep it going please, we love it!
Reviewed by Trixie Love 4/15/2003
Hi Paul,
Well dear friend,
You did well....:)

Trixie
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 4/15/2003
I really like this Paul
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader) 4/15/2003
yipeee..........you know what you ought to do? combine both your loves together....
Great write, loved it
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 4/15/2003
Very ceative indeed
Ain't that sweet
To get such a tread
with sunflower and wheat
Nice slice of bread

lololol treat

Love
Tinka
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader) 4/15/2003
I wish I could rhyme I never been able to so great jobon the rhyming now can u teach me how to? PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 4/15/2003
You have such a gift for rhyme...go for it. The beauty of free verse is the rhythm and choice of the words.
Reviewed by Leysa Robertson 4/15/2003
*Smiles*
Great message in wonderful phrasing!
Reviewed by Christine Morell 4/15/2003
Perfect rhyme and flow Paul.
I also love rhyme, strict or very subtle and I like to play around with different rhythms. But sometimes what I want to say has to run free You do both extremely well.
Chrissie
Reviewed by Linda Hill 4/15/2003
Excellent rhyming, my friend...
I had always thought I HAD to
rhyme, but some of mine are
free verse, and I find it much
easier. I do rhyme more often
than not because it too is my
first love :)
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 4/15/2003
I admit to not being a poet, and I knowit. I write what is in my minds eye or imagination. You do the same.
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 4/15/2003
Keep rhyming Paul. Thanks for the laugh on heads will roll. I really like this poem.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 4/15/2003
Paul,
I love it when your frustrated this is so good and I loved the rhyme. I cannot rhyme so I have been told but I love free verse mixed with the ryhme a tast devine from both worlds, I loved this one.
Peggy
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 4/15/2003
Great write, don't give up, at first I could only write in rhyme but now enjoy free verse as well, funny how some of our minds tend to run in rhyme!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 4/15/2003
Rhyme is my frustration in poetry and its wonderful to me when I can read poems with it. You have done excellent writing in this one. Maybe if I keep reading your work I will learn :-)
Reviewed by Shezray Faisal 4/15/2003
GREAT write :)
~Shezz
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 4/15/2003
Hi Paul......you know I love to rhyme ;)....tho...I do enjoy the odd bit of free verse. Rhyme runs through these veins though....I swear I rhyme in my sleep. Enjoyed this write.....Ty, Dani
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 4/15/2003
Hi Paul:

Excellent work! Great rhyme indeed!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 4/15/2003
Good Morning, Paul
I like to rhyme. I think your rhming was great.

namaste
tony

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