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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
5/1/2008 |
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It takes a lot of talent to get words to rhyme beautifully. I'm glad you decided to embrace your first love, Paul! Great poem. Your frustration doesn't come across as much as your love for rhyme does. Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
4/15/2003 |
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Hey, I liked this one so much! Ha, I don't try to rhyme, either it does, or it doesn't..
Excellent,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/15/2003 |
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| Paul many would kill to have your rhythm and rhyme, so keep it going please, we love it! |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
4/15/2003 |
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Hi Paul,
Well dear friend,
You did well....:)
Trixie |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
4/15/2003 |
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| I really like this Paul |
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| Reviewed by Calendula Petal |
4/15/2003 |
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yipeee..........you know what you ought to do? combine both your loves together....
Great write, loved it |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/15/2003 |
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Very ceative indeed
Ain't that sweet
To get such a tread
with sunflower and wheat
Nice slice of bread
lololol treat
Love
Tinka |
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| Reviewed by the phantom pheonix |
4/15/2003 |
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| I wish I could rhyme I never been able to so great jobon the rhyming now can u teach me how to? PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
4/15/2003 |
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| You have such a gift for rhyme...go for it. The beauty of free verse is the rhythm and choice of the words. |
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| Reviewed by Leysa Robertson |
4/15/2003 |
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*Smiles*
Great message in wonderful phrasing! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
4/15/2003 |
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Perfect rhyme and flow Paul.
I also love rhyme, strict or very subtle and I like to play around with different rhythms. But sometimes what I want to say has to run free You do both extremely well.
Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
4/15/2003 |
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Excellent rhyming, my friend...
I had always thought I HAD to
rhyme, but some of mine are
free verse, and I find it much
easier. I do rhyme more often
than not because it too is my
first love :) |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
4/15/2003 |
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| I admit to not being a poet, and I knowit. I write what is in my minds eye or imagination. You do the same. |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
4/15/2003 |
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| Keep rhyming Paul. Thanks for the laugh on heads will roll. I really like this poem. |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
4/15/2003 |
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Paul,
I love it when your frustrated this is so good and I loved the rhyme. I cannot rhyme so I have been told but I love free verse mixed with the ryhme a tast devine from both worlds, I loved this one.
Peggy |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
4/15/2003 |
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| Great write, don't give up, at first I could only write in rhyme but now enjoy free verse as well, funny how some of our minds tend to run in rhyme! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
4/15/2003 |
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| Rhyme is my frustration in poetry and its wonderful to me when I can read poems with it. You have done excellent writing in this one. Maybe if I keep reading your work I will learn :-) |
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| Reviewed by Shezray Faisal |
4/15/2003 |
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GREAT write :)
~Shezz |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
4/15/2003 |
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| Hi Paul......you know I love to rhyme ;)....tho...I do enjoy the odd bit of free verse. Rhyme runs through these veins though....I swear I rhyme in my sleep. Enjoyed this write.....Ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
4/15/2003 |
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Hi Paul:
Excellent work! Great rhyme indeed!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
4/15/2003 |
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Good Morning, Paul
I like to rhyme. I think your rhming was great.
namaste
tony
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