November's Rain
by Tracey L Hardie
Tuesday, April 15, 2003
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I may not have walked
your path, yet I journeyed
to where you are,
felt the coldness of
November's rain
as thick as London's fog.
I may not have walked
by you, yet I saw
the place you stood,
eyes of grayish blue,
a weathered face,
a man so misunderstood.
I may not have walked
into your life, yet I felt
the empty eagerness
you held within your heart.
I offered you my love
from where I stood
so close, yet so far apart.
I may not have walked
the distance, yet I knew
how many miles between,
the road less traveled,
the one we both have seen.
Copyright 2003 Tracey L. Hardie
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| Reviewed by Maurice |
4/17/2003 |
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| I must agree with your other fans thats last verse was powerful |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
4/16/2003 |
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| Incredibly lovely, Tracey. |
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| Reviewed by Jack Roberts |
4/16/2003 |
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Beautiful write Tracey!
Jack |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
4/15/2003 |
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Tracey,
Such beauty and emotion
"I many not have walked
the distance, yet I knew
how many miles between,
the road less traveled,
the one we both have seen. "
Peggy
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
4/15/2003 |
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| Love, glad to see you post. |
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| Reviewed by Cherokee Sage |
4/15/2003 |
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Exceptional verses, pretty lady.
Peace,
Cherokee |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
4/15/2003 |
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Tracey,
Great title, and very touching write! It hits that spot deep inside.
"I many not have walked
the distance, yet I knew
how many miles between,
the road less traveled,
the one we both have seen."
This is my favorite stanza!
Hugs,
Maria
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/15/2003 |
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| I really like this, Tracey. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
4/15/2003 |
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| Beautiful verses, Tracey. Reminds me of someone here at the Den going through a rough patch of his own making. Bravo...insightful. |
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| Reviewed by Madame X |
4/15/2003 |
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| Exceptional write! Loved this! |
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