As If You Can't Handle It Go Someplace Else...
by - - - - - - - TRASK
Tuesday, April 15, 2003
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I Write & Read Alot . Authorsden,Some Stuff I Don't Read, It Doesn't Appeal To Me I Don't Get My Ace In Hole I Read Something Else Is The Solution...
There're People. Authorsden Less Than 3rd
Grade Mentality,Who Write,Don't Know,Made
What For, But, It Doesn't Bother Me_
I Just Do Not Read It, If You Cannot
Handle What I Write, Be My Delight,Ought
You Do Not Read It, Heed It, And Read__
You Can't Read Between Lines_Just Read_
Something Else: Why Get Your Ace In Hole
Whence The Only Dole,Tole, Is That Hole
In Your Own Head!If It's Porno Poems_
Simple Shit, Who Cares If Or What Or
Who Writes It,It's Religion,I'm Not For
Religion__ I Just Don't Read It! We're_
All Here To Express Your/Ourselves,If
You Wrote Something,It Offends Some 1,If
Nothing Else You Tried, So What? Next_
Authorsden For Most Part It Is FREE_Next_
Month I May Not Be Able $Pay My $Rent,I
Don't Get Chills Or Thrills, I Just Vie,
Take It 1 Day . a Time! You'll Die Soon_
Enough,Why Grieve It,Why Hurry It Up?Why
Read Somebodies Shit,You Can't Get(Deny)
You Can't Get Your Own Together_I Write_
What Comes To Me In Silence;I Write,You
Just Learned New Word,Can't Handle It,You
Should Just Go Away In Silence__
While You're . It Don't Look Back...
Destitution, TRASK c 2003 TRASK
You Bet This Is Serious For All Of Us Here . Authordsden:Is A Place To Express Your Poems,Prose In Thoughts,i.e.
Freedom Of Speech...
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|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|This was so good ......well expressed straight and to the point no beating
around Loved your message in your poem !This was victorious !
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|What's going on here is simply an exceedingly pompous puppet refusing to take a much needed bow.... Though like all plays....the curtains will close and the actor will again be out of the spotlight. Tragic!
Damn, and I thought poetry was the name of the game here.
Strong thoughts ....as only you do Trask....Ty, Dani
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|I do agree...if you don't like what someone is feeling with paper and pen don't read it don't review it, everyone should be able to express themselves without being trashed. Z|
|Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix
|this was verytrue and honest nice job on this one|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|((( Aplause ))))
Much needed write, my
|Reviewed by Sharon Williamson (Reader)
|You really make some valid points here,very well done. Do unto others.....
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Trask this is an outstanding and needed statement, I agree completely with you and yes what is going on here is disgusting and dangerously serious. Bravo to you for writing this, I admire you.|
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|well said, trask, well said.|
|Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
A standing ovation to you dear sir!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|I couldn't agree with you more here,
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|No, we don't have to read is right
We will all go away in silence
when we're dead
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent Trask.. points well made...|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
This is serious....