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Unnatural Visions of Ourselves
by Erin E Kelly-Moen
Wednesday, April 16, 2003
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(Our shining, cosmic spirits
are encapsulated, prisoners
of borrowed, earthy flesh,
to be placed,
indelicately perhaps,
on our now-world...)

She has freckles galore,
she sees them in the mirror,
and she hates them,
feeling marred, marked,
ugly...she is sure
that without them,
her true self she could explore.

(Forgotten are the heavens
traveled through, joyously,
and freely, as unencumbered spirits,
pulsing through cosmically charged dust
and greeting births of stars...)

He has tried to ignore
that he is slowly going bald,
he hates it,
feeling bared, inferior,
ugly...he is sure
with a full head of hair,
he could make the score.

(Quasars of living light
search to the unlimits,
souls tag along blithely,
diving into black holes
to explore otherwhen...)

She canít stop eating, anymore,
itís a vicious circle,
and she hates herself,
feeling stupid, huge,
ugly...she is sure
if she were skinny,
she would be unhappy no more.

(Spectacular vibration-scenery
and infra-radar clash,
and meld, and the spirits dance
in cosmic fireworks
of supra-expansion...)

His shortness, he has come to abhor,
women look down on him,
he hates himself,
feeling stunted, undersized,
ugly...he is sure
if he were taller,
he could get his foot in the door.

(As one by one, the souls are set free
from fleshy constraints,
the spirits blaze with beauty,
multi-colors flashing, unfettered,
souls of light, dipping and gliding,
into the heavens, our true

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 8/18/02

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Reviewed by Thomas Mutchler 4/18/2003
beautifully cryptic...and I can relate to the 4th stanza..nice wording

Reviewed by jude forese 4/16/2003
outstanding poem... bravo!
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader) 4/16/2003
this was very deepp wisdom and truth nice job on this one
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 4/16/2003
This was beautiful, you are an outstanding poet!

Reviewed by Paul Berube 4/16/2003
Erin, this was awesome. Excellent write. You leave me speechless.
Reviewed by Debra Brown (Reader) 4/16/2003
Ahh, I love your poetic and beautiful soul self!!
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 4/16/2003
fantastic write...loved the back and forth...if only everyone would remember their true spirit...thank you for this!
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*ģ 4/16/2003
Erin, A spectacular Vision of Light! I truly enjoyed this piece! ~Joseph
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 4/16/2003
Truly outstanding write, I'm awed!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/16/2003
BRAVO! this is exciting exquisite work with knowledge of what is "real" and what is just temporary;-) Love it!!!
Reviewed by Tony Nerone 4/16/2003
Good Morning, Erin
Extremely thought provoking. Excellent write Ms.Arizona.

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore 4/16/2003
now this is my kind of work. you are an eternal alpomegan, i see, identified by your memory of the light. lol...powerfully magical work, poet. keep on helping us all remember who we really are... :)
Reviewed by Erica Ivory 4/16/2003
I love how you switched from earthy worries to celestial lightness.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 4/16/2003
"As one by one, the souls are set free
from fleshy constraints,
the spirits blaze with beauty,
multi-colors flashing, unfettered,
souls of light, dipping and gliding,
into the heavens, our true
birthright...) "
Loved the verses.
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 4/16/2003
Our biggest fault of all.
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