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|Reviewed by Cheryl Smith (Reader)
|Hey Girl, WOW I think the first half is EXCELLENT and powerfully honest. Why the explanatory stanzas? The poem was complete after the second lost innocence - reread it and see if you agree.|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
|Such a deep heartfelt write...
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)