|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
This one has a lyrical rhythm and the imagery is vivid. Love it! Hugs:)
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|I love the part about kisses that smother.... This is great! Very sad and dreamy at the same time. Good work! Teresa|
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|MMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmm lovely poem could picture this whole setting in my mind|
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix
|this was a wonderfully well told poem ncie job on this one|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|nice reflections of days of old..and fairy tales!!|
|Reviewed by Leysa Lowery
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|You do such good work, Paul. Bravo.|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|I love knight poetry
this has me smiling!
|Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
|i like the scarf part
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|nice rhythm...nice reflections of days of old..and fairy tales..|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Outstanding poetry, Paul
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|I liked this one so much! It was very good, these words:
Tip of a spear would pierce the skin,
and a scream would shatter the night.
Through open window, the sun would shine in,
and memories were lost in the light.
Just got to me this morning,
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|This is so enchanting.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Wonderful write. So simple and yet complexed.|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Oh this was so veery excellent I love that last stanza.....
Thankyou what a gift this morning.
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|"Once Upon A Knight" of an early night dream, and all the knowledge of history and experience of life, memories come alive and poemization begins... Emotions are translated into words poetized to be a master piece called "Once Upon A Knight" - for mine and billion others´ enjoyment.
I Salute the Author of "Once Upon A Knight".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
One of your best,
|Reviewed by Jim Corbin
|Delightful! Pretty good flow, and a really cute story! :)|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Tip of a spear, pierced my mind with this.|